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Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

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The educational system and different approaches to the learning system are substantial topics among
families
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 and societies. It is often said that studying at boarding
schools
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 is more comfortable and effective for
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.
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, many people disagree about separating
students
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 from their
families
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 for a long time.
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 essay will discuss both opinions and give a concluding view. on the one hand, those who support boarding
schools
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 believe that being at school will provide massive opportunities for pupils to be in touch with their professors and sources, which could be a unique situation for them.
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, they have easy access to their teachers and schoolmates when they face problems.
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, they can study at 24 hours library.
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,
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 have a chance to make friends and be more sociable in the boarding school’s atmosphere.
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, they can have friends of different ages and fields.
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, opponents of
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 view highlight that
students
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 should spend more time with their
families
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 rather than being in educational places. Being far from
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 would have grave effects in long term. An example can be seen in
students
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'
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 in the two mentioned groups.
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,
students
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 would miss specific moments of happiness and sadness that happen to their
families
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 when they are at boarding
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.
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, if they lost a loving member of their
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, they would not have the chance to be with other members.
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, it is sensible
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 that boarding
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 could help
students
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 to be independent and learn more and more.
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