You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter
Dear sir/madam,
I am writing
this
letter to you regarding of
the position that you have been advertised in the newspaper yesterday, which I am really interested to apply for Change preposition
apply
this
job.
My name is June Chan, I am a chinese
Malaysian. I Change the capitalization
Chinese
Correct your spelling
am
an
a qualified baker, I have been worked in the Sunray bakery for 2 years, due to my family reason I must to leave the job that I really like and Correct your spelling
am
relocated
Wrong verb form
relocate
in
Mildura. I can make Change preposition
to
lot
of different Change the article
a lot
desserts
, asian
and western Change the capitalization
Asian
such
as cheesecake, mouse-cake, lemon pie, egg tart and so much more. My desserts
are especially famous and well-liked in the city. Therefore
, I would like to apply the
position to keep Change preposition
for the
make
Wrong verb form
making
the
famous Correct article usage
apply
desserts
to
the local people.
Could you please let me know when is the best time that I could bring my resume and references to you, Change preposition
for
also
I can bring some desserts
for you, and give me your feedback.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Thank you.
Yours faithfully
JuneChange the punctuation
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