You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter

Dear sir/madam, I am writing
this
letter to you regarding
of
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the position that you have been advertised in the newspaper yesterday, which I am really interested to apply for
this
job. My name is June Chan, I am a
chinese
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Chinese
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Malaysian. I
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am
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an
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a qualified baker, I have been worked in the Sunray bakery for 2 years, due to my family reason I must to leave the job that I really like and
relocated
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in
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Mildura. I can make
lot
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of different
desserts
,
asian
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and western
such
as cheesecake, mouse-cake, lemon pie, egg tart and so much more. My
desserts
are especially famous and well-liked in the city.
Therefore
, I would like to apply
the
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position to keep
make
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the
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famous
desserts
to
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for
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the local people. Could you please let me know when is the best time that I could bring my resume and references to you,
also
I can bring some
desserts
for you, and give me your feedback
.
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I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you. Yours faithfully June
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