Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved?

The topic of studying abroad is extremely relevant in our time .So let’s consider the pros and cons of
students
studying abroad and the advantages for the
country
in which they are studying.
To begin
with, in many
countries
such
as Russia, Ukraine, Kazakhstan and many African
countries
, there are relatively few good universities and even those that are available are still not equal to American and European universities .
Therefore
, many young
people
go/choose to
study
abroad . The reason is that
students
don't want to spend five years of their life on superficial knowledge .Because education in our time is an important part of future success.
Secondly
, in CIS, African and other economically unstable
countries
, the government can not take care of
students
and
providi
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provide
providing
them with decent student hostels, scholarships ,and discounts for public transport. And
this
is very important for
students
because it’s very difficult for them to find a job, especially in
countries
that don’t think about
students
’ welfare.
Moreover
, studying abroad is an exciting journey, where you can meet new
people
and
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some new life experience.In the future,
this
will help to determine the
country
where a person wishes/would like to live.For the vast majority of
people
,
this
is
also
a valid reason to
study
in another
country
.For those who wish to stay
abroad
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a student visa is the best way to obtain a residence permit with the slightest difficulty/obstacles.
Besides
, it should not be forgotten that the
countries
in which the
students
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study
get the brightest minds, and labour force.Just take a look at the example of the USA. The richest
people
in
this
country
are immigrants who used to
study
there. After all, from studying abroad everyone wins:
students
study
in prestigious universities,
countries
become richer.
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