You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. 1. Give details of your study plans 2. Explain why you want to get a part-time job 3. Suggest how your friend could help you find a job.
Dear Gauri, It has been so long since we met,I hope you and your family are doing well. You will be pleased to know that I am coming to Germany for my
further
studies and I was hoping you could help me in finding a part-time job
. As you know, I completed my Mechanical Engineering 3 years ago and have being
doing a Change the verb form
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job
as a Project manager since then
. But recently I had decided to pursue further
education and had given the necessary entrance exams for the same. And
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effort
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I got selected Add a comma
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at
the
Hof University for my Master's course with my major in Industrial Engineering Correct article usage
apply
& Management
. My lectures will commence from Correct your spelling
and management
1st
of May Correct article usage
the 1st
this
year, but I will be arriving 15 days prior. This
will give me some buffer time to settle down and to
get to know the city well. As my lectures will be just 4 days a week,I am planning to do a part-time Fix the infinitive
apply
job
along with
my studies. This
will help me save money for my education so that I can replay my education-loan
at Correct your spelling
education loan
earliest
and Correct article usage
the earliest
also
I will get good experience while
working. I was expecting you could suggest me few part time
jobs you might know. As you stay over there you can connect me with Add a hyphen
part-time
few
of your local contacts and reliable sources who can help me in finding a Correct article usage
a few
part time
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part-time
job
. Waiting eagerly to meet you. Best wishes Vedang PonksheSubmitted by akshay.thakare2804 on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion