You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. 1. Give details of your study plans 2. Explain why you want to get a part-time job 3. Suggest how your friend could help you find a job.

Dear Gauri, It has been so long since we met,I hope you and your family are doing well. You will be pleased to know that I am coming to Germany for my

further

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studies and I was hoping you could help me in finding a part-time

job

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. As you know, I completed my Mechanical Engineering 3 years ago and have

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doing a

job

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as a Project manager since

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. But recently I had decided to pursue

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education and had given the necessary entrance exams for the same.

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finally

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finally,

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after putting

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efforts

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I got selected

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apply

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Hof University for my Master's course with my major in Industrial Engineering

& Management

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and management

. My lectures will commence from

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the 1st

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of May

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year, but I will be arriving 15 days prior.

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will give me some buffer time to settle down and

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get to know the city well. As my lectures will be just 4 days a week,I am planning to do a part-time

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my studies.

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will help me save money for my education so that I can replay my

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education loan

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earliest

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and

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I will get good experience

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working. I was expecting you could suggest me few

part time

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part-time

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jobs you might know. As you stay over there you can connect me with

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a few

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of your local contacts and reliable sources who can help me in finding a

part time

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part-time

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job

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. Waiting eagerly to meet you. Best wishes Vedang Ponkshe