You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. 1. Give details of your study plans 2. Explain why you want to get a part-time job 3. Suggest how your friend could help you find a job.

Dear Gauri, It has been so long since we met,I hope you and your family are doing well. You will be pleased to know that I am coming to Germany for my
further
studies and I was hoping you could help me in finding a part-time
job
. As you know, I completed my Mechanical Engineering 3 years ago and have
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doing a
job
as a Project manager since
then
. But recently I had decided to pursue
further
education and had given the necessary entrance exams for the same.
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I got selected
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Hof University for my Master's course with my major in Industrial Engineering
& Management
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and management
. My lectures will commence from
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of May
this
year, but I will be arriving 15 days prior.
This
will give me some buffer time to settle down and
to
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get to know the city well. As my lectures will be just 4 days a week,I am planning to do a part-time
job
along with
my studies.
This
will help me save money for my education so that I can replay my
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at
earliest
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and
also
I will get good experience
while
working. I was expecting you could suggest me few
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jobs you might know. As you stay over there you can connect me with
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of your local contacts and reliable sources who can help me in finding a
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job
. Waiting eagerly to meet you. Best wishes Vedang Ponkshe
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational aspirations
  • Work experience
  • Financial independence
  • Resume (or CV)
  • Local job market
  • International student
  • Legal requirements
  • Student work permit
  • Employment trends
  • Time management
  • Networking
  • A part-time position
  • Balance studies and work
  • Job hunting strategies
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