Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their health and diet. Others, however, believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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weakness
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weaknesses
health
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health
ministry of India, 65% of Indian Add an article
the health
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older
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,they have mental challenges like depression and anxiety. Reportedly, all the statistical evidence shows that our own Linking Words
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life
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people
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food Change preposition
about their
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government
authorities have their own duties and responsibilities to impart Use synonyms
proper
healthy lifestyle among citizens . Ostensibly, promoting Correct article usage
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health
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protein rich
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people
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the major
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this
, in 1985 Linking Words
Government
of India introduced Use synonyms
mid-day
meals program among school students for generating Correct article usage
a mid-day
a healthy children
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healthy children
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having
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.
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needs
join
hand to get Correct your spelling
joint
a
social wellness and happiness.Remove the article
apply
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