Some people think in order to continually improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others feel that this would result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

An improving the quality of education is the top priority of every nation. some think that

students

have the right to evaluate their's staff members while others say that

this

can lead to affecting negatively.

However

,

this

essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

To begin

with, the

school

adminstration

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administration

should be motivated to their's

pupils

which is any problem about their's staff members in

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the classroom

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and they do not

explian

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explain

clearly any lesson while

students

tell freely to the management.

This

can lead to developing to tehir's knowledge as well as the teachers

also

would give more attention and

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briefly.

In addition

, the management should put in a suggestion box in every class inside and the

students

would be written any

compliants

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complaints

without mentioning

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. Taking Melbourne

for example

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every

school

has followed

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the suggestion box,

thus

,

pupils

can get more rights and wisdom from the quality of teachers and

this

can create a close bonding with tutors and

students

.

In contrast

,

this

extra right can be affected

student's

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respect

and behaviour towards the professors, sometimes they unwantedly criticize their's tutors,

thus

,

this

can

distroy

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destroy

the

harmony

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relationship between teacher and

school

children. If a

school

girl only gives

respect

towards professors

otherwise

she always gives more attention to find out any mistake to

lecturer

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the lecturer

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,

as a result

,

academic

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result might affect.

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,

in

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India has followed these kinds of

suggstion

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suggestion

suggestions

box

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boxes

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in

classroom

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,

thus

, the

students

did not give more focus to their's academic syllabus

instead

of they have liked to find out

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the mistake

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mistake

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to

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the examiner lecture,

hence

, the management

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stopped immediately

this

new right. To conclude, the

school

commitees

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committees

committee

should be

encourged

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encouraged

coursed

to their's

pupils

will tell openly about their's examiners

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and evaluation about their's teaching method.

This

can affect the

students

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student's

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respect

and obey towards teacher and classroom.

However

, in my opinion, about

this

, these kinds of freedom would be affected

respect

and discipline who are

pupils

towards their's professors. I believe that

this

kind of process should be stopped in all tutorials.