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some people say that the main enviironmental problem oof our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more improtant environmental problems. Discuss both vies and give your own opinion.

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These days, many environmental
problems
 are happening ranging from global warming and pollution to extinction.
Loss
 of particular
species
 of plants and animals
such
 as white tigers, beluga whales and others are very important. Some say that there are more important environmental
problems
. The
first
 side,
problem
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 of
loss
 of
species
 are indeed critical. They have
an
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 huge effect on us.
For example
,
food
 webs will be broken and our
food
 might not be available. When
grasshopers
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grasshoppers
 goes extinct,
then
 the
amount
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number
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 of birds
with
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decrease, the animals who eat birds,
such
 as foxes will face losses as well. Like
this
,
food
 webs might be broken which can
also
 lead to us, humans having
lack
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 of
food
that is
neccesary
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necessary
 for us to survive.
On the other hand
, there
are
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 always
bigger
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a bigger
the bigger
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problem
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problems
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. It is because these
problems
 can lead to other many
problems
.
For instance
, global warming can lead to everything being destroyed including Earth while the
first
 problem ends up in the
loss
 of certain
species
. Pollution can lead to us having to leave Earth, but
loss
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the loss
a loss
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 of
species
 still allows us to live on our planet. These
problems
 can
also
 bring to
loss
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the loss
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 of
species
 which some says
that
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is the most important.
This
 proves that there are bigger
problems
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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