It is more important to spend public money promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is more important to spend public money promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of

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who are already ill. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Having a healthy routine plays a vital role in order to achieve success. Citizens fitness should be prioritized by the states. There should be more planning, campaigns and strive to spread awareness about how

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can live healthily rather than putting efforts into curing

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disease. I agree with

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statement that more and more funds should be sanctioned creating awareness which is extremely important.

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essay will throw some light on the same.

To begin

with, in today's fast-paced

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, well-being has been

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highly

undermined due to cut-throat competition across the globe. Which causes many issues like anxiety, unwanted stress and hampering productivity.

Such

problems have become a major concern globally.

Moreover

, a better way of living not only help an individual in success but

also

make a

person

more positive towards the desired goal.

For instance

, generally, an unhealthy

person

mood fluctuates a lot, which leaves a negative impact on his performance.

Thus

,

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approach, as well as knowledge, is really important. Another primary reason is, in recent

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, a big section of

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the population

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eats junk food which again leads to a disproportionate diet. Due to

this

youngsters are facing many ailments like obesity, high blood and heart diseases. Some experts have already been alarmed that upcoming generations may face severe problems as compared to previous ones.

Furthermore

, a weaker immune system is

also

one of the causes of emerging unwanted diseases in recent times. It is evident that if a

person

is not immunity is not strong

then

one is very likely to fall sick. I think Covid 19 is one of the best examples of

this

. The virus impacted those who were already unwell and it affected them the most. It was

also

proven that the

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alcoholic

person

and smokers were badly affected,too.

Hence

, spreading information about staying healthy and more importantly how to execute healthy living in their lives is paramount. In conclusion, It can not be denied that providing treatment for any illness is imperative.

However

, in my view, enhancing overall well-being and sanitations is quite beneficial. Governments should be more careful and extra money should be sanctioned in order to provide

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information related to fitness. So that every individual must be aware of

ygiene

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hygiene

.