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Some people spend most of their living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantage?

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Some individuals receive a comfortable feeling when they live their entire
life
 in their hometown. Emotional support is seen to be the main advantage while stagnant
life
 is
the
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identified as the major drawback. On the
one
 hand, living near
the
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 place where
you
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your
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 families and friends will give you emotional support. In
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a time
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time
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times
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 of trouble, they can easily call them physically and they can immediately
response
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 and come over to help.
For example
,
Filipino
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cultured
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 we have
so called
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 “extended families”, families where all their relatives are staying in
one
 compound or in
one
 house. Even your friends,
they
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are staying in
a
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 same barangay or barrio. As a
results
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, you have
an
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easy access to all of them personally without having difficulty and can gain more bonding memories.
On the other hand
, staying in the same place where you
rooted
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 can give you a stagnant
live
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. You will never gain new things, new knowledge, new job opportunities and meet people.
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 will never help you to stand on your own because you always think that you have your families and friends on the side.
For instance
, many young generations, still don’t know what the word responsibility is and
being
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 contented
of
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 what opportunity they have,
hence
, they are taking for granted all the things
hey
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they
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 surround them. In conclusion, living close to your
love
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loved
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one
 can give your more support in times of need. While staying near them can give you
less
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fewer
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 opportunities to
life
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live
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.
However
, it’s up to people whether they
life
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live
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 the way they used to be or not.
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