You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student who is registered in your

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for

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semester and I am writing

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letter to inform you that I might not be able to continue the

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due to a change that has been made in my job. Please let me provide brief personal information; I work as a project manager in a technology company. On the one hand, I took your

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because my job involves some coding knowledge.

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, I am always interested in learning new skills and I thought it would be useful in life. Unfortunately, it was all right until recently I was assigned by the corporation to move to a different branch in another city.

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I am keen to learn in your evening

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, it is not possible to make it happen now. Now, I am wondering if it would be possible for me to rejoin a cohort

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July when I come back. it would be greatly appreciated if you could let me know as soon as possible Yours faithfully, Jason

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

180 words

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