Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are the solutions?

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individuals and the youth for the same available positions in companies.

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situation can face

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a wide range of difficulties.

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some concerns of

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matter,

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the possible treatment.

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unbalanced rivalry might cause two different

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, the

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of the older people who are searching

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vacancy in organizations. In

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case, employers require the young staff because they believe the younger, the more active and full of energy.

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, the previous generation

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going to encounter

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a number of dilemmas.

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, they are not able to pay their costs

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they highly likely formed a family and in

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it is expected they spend more expenses.

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, the rate of poverty will be raised by

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of the older people.

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, the

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of the newcomers who are seeking

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an occupation. In

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regard, employers are interested to employ

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which not only

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well-experienced but

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have

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long-lasting

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background

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kind of

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cannot trust

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inexperienced employees.

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, the rate of crime will be increased among

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experienced

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. According to statistics,

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is known as a major cause of committing crimes among youngsters. The main remedy for

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concern is considered the collaboration of employers. It is suggested that employment of both groups keep in balance.

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, it is better that companies employ

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both types with the same proportion. In conclusion, preference one category of

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might cause many problems. So, it is recommended to avoid

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discrimination.