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People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?

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Issues related to the lack of
sleeping
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 are frequently discussed these days. It is true that
people
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 have slept less than the previous day. There is the main reason for
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 and the effects of sleeping less will be shown in the following paragraphs. I consider
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 trend will be a negative trend to
be avoiding
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. As for the first question, the principal reason why
people
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 lack
sleeping
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sleep
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 is that humans have been
overload-working
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overloaded with work
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 over recent years. To explain, in the modern world, working in many big companies
has
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 more competitive than before.
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, many workers have to
work
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 overtime to gain more money
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 present their effective assignments.
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,
due to
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 high living costs, most
people
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 have to
work
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 more than one job in a day.
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, most
people
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 living in Bangkok have
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suffered since they have to
work
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 more than 8 hours a day in order to increase their income.
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, they often sleep over midnight
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 wake up early than before. Regarding the second question, there are several effects of sleeping less on individuals and surrounding
people
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. The essential effect is that insufficient
sleeping
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sleep
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 has a negative impact on human health;
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 as stress and obesity.
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 means that sleepless humans often lack physical exercise
that
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 can lead them to be less productive in their performances.
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, a recent study showed that children sleeping late tend to confront overweight problems more than other kids because of ineffective metabolism in the
human's
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 body. All things considered; I am of the opinion that most
people
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 today are living in sleepless societies because of excessive
work
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.
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, they have been coping with many health problems.
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, individuals should carefully have an awareness of the reason for
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for avoiding
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to avoid
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 the negative effects.
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