You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Hello John, I am really glad that you invited me to your country . Actually, I am writing
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letter to ask you about a possible present that you recommend for your family. I would
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request information about the type of activities , wears and cuisine in your city. As you know , my village produces a lot of
bio products
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bioproducts
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such
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as olive oil, jam and honey. So, I am thinking that a food basket made from straw and decorated with some regional flowers will be a charming gift for your parents.
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to that, I heard from you that the weather is very cold in your town.
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, which category of clothes
you
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advice
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in
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case. What about
entertaiment
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entertainment
places ? are we going to the
lack
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lake
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near to your house where we can catch some
fishes
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fish
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.
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I heard that your region is well-known
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seafood dishes especially salmons and craps. Are they any other traditional plates there?
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, I am very pleased with your invitation. I am looking forward to
meet
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as soon as possible. Sincerely yours, Ali Hammoud
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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