In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.

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of the US, a “

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” has been imposed upon

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teenagers

and they would not be able to go outdoors unless accompanied by an adult.

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the

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freedom is undermined, I believe that imposing

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is essential.

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, the readers must be made aware

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type of

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where the

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has been imposed. It was imposed only in rural

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and villages in the woods

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and was not imposed in major cities. In the past, the

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in these

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have been attacked or killed by the cougars in the forest. As other plans failed and with the rise in the number of cougar sightings, the townsmen had decided to

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to

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prevent

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incidents from happening. A peculiar aspect

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is that these cougars attack only the

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but not the adults or livestock. When a teenager is accompanied by an adult, these carnivores leave them alone.

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, these

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are allowed outdoors when they are accompanied by an adult.

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, these sightings and incidents take place only after 6 pm. The townsmen noticed that these cougars are inactive during

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and attack only at

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particular time.

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supports that the

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in these regions is logical and has to be followed judicially. In conclusion, It is in the best interest of these

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that the

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has been implemented in these

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. I trust that

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is the best plan of action for the townsmen and villagers to

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their young folk in town.