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In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.

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In some
areas
 of the US, a “
curfew
” has been imposed upon
teengers
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teenagers
 and they would not be able to go outdoors unless accompanied by an adult.
Eventhough
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Even though
 the
teengers
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teenagers
 freedom is undermined, I believe that imposing
this
curfew
 is essential.
Firstly
, the readers must be made aware
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that
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 type of
areas
 where the
curfew
 has been imposed. It was imposed only in rural
areas
 and villages in the woods
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 and was not imposed in major cities. In the past, the
teenagers
 in these
areas
 have been attacked or killed by the cougars in the forest. As other plans failed and with the rise in the number of cougar sightings, the townsmen had decided to
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 a
curfew
to
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prevent
such
horid
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horrid
 incidents from happening. A peculiar aspect
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incidents
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 is that these cougars attack only the
teenagers
 but not the adults or livestock. When a teenager is accompanied by an adult, these carnivores leave them alone.
Hence
, these
teenagers
 are allowed outdoors when they are accompanied by an adult.
Additionally
, these sightings and incidents take place only after 6 pm. The townsmen noticed that these cougars are inactive during
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 and attack only at
this
 particular time.
This
also
 supports that the
curfew
 in these regions is logical and has to be followed judicially. In conclusion, It is in the best interest of these
teenagers
 that the
curfew
 has been implemented in these
areas
. I trust that
this
 is the best plan of action for the townsmen and villagers to
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 their young folk in town.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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