Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places.

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Nowadays due to urbanization more and more families are moving from the suburbs to the
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, some are arguing that
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will have
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upbringing in the countryside,while others disagree with them. In
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I will be discussing both the pros and the cons of
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growing up on the ruler side
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the
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with, the main advantage of
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growing in the
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is being able to have access to superior educational institutions which offer much more than academic learning.
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. Major cities have plenty of facilities
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as libraries and recreation
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. These places provide
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with learning and entertainment tools.
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to that, through navigating local transportations and
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streets to develop
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in public
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will become more independent and mature at an early age.
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, one of the major drawbacks of living in the
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is the air pollution that comes from vehicles and factories that emit gases which lead to health issues
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Children
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who live in the
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have more sedentary lives unlike those in the countryside which spend most of their day in the fresh air playing in the grass or climbing the trees.another major issue with living in the
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safety . A recent study that was published in the New York Times showed that the crime rate in the suburbs is much lower than in the cities which make it a much safer place to raise
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in . To sum up, both living in the rural areas or in the
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have their own pros and cons.
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it is up to each individual which is the more suitable place to raise
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in.
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