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In modern societies, grandchildren rarely spend time with their grandparents. What do you think are the consequences of it?

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Grandparents
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 play a pivotal role in the life of any family , nowadays many children are spending less time with their
grandparents
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 has led to many drawbacks in society which I will be discussing in
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 with, it is no secret that
grandparents
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 are the glue of the youngsters to their history and tradition, and by spending less time with
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 children will grow up not having any attachment or appreciation of their roots or culture.
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 ,we live in an era where often both parents have to work. In
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 a situation children need their
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 in their lives to support and love them and
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 install good value in them.
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 has led to many health issues in regard to the elderly. A recent study that was conducted in the UK has shown that having close relationships with grandchildren is beneficial for both parties . elderly are less prone to
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 problems
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 as Alzheimer's or anxiety. And youngsters will grow up having more emotional intelligence. Overall, in my opinion,
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 provide the support and the care a child needs during the growing up days, missing out on which often leads them to live a life of void and deprived of the true meaning of family.
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