The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pie graphs

depicts

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the ratio of 3 different kinds of

nutrients

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in 4 types of typical meals by dividing each pie graph

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into

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four sections, proportionate to their percentage. In general

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it is seen that at dinner there is

highest

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the highest

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level of harmful ingredients like sodium and saturated fat

while

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at breakfast all 3 kinds of unhealthy

remains

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remain

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at the minimum level. From

analyhzing

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analysing

the graphs we can see that sodium and saturated fat is at their peak of 43% and 37% respectively in dinner,

whereas

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snack contains the maximum ratio of added sugar of 42%. At

lunch

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the first two

nutrients

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exist on a little more than a quarter

while

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the rest ingredient exists on

one fifth

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one-fifth

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Furthermore

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, breakfast has

lowest

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the lowest

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proportion of the mentioned

nutrients

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apply

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around 15%. At the same time,

although

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snack is high

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added sugar

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apply

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42%,

but

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it has

lower

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a lower

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percentage of the rest two

nutrients

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at 14% and 21% respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words nutrients with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

160 words

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might these differences cause? How might these problems be reduced?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.