The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie graphs
depicts
the ratio of 3 different kinds of Change the verb form
depict
nutrients
in 4 types of typical meals by dividing each pie graph in
four sections, proportionate to their percentage.
In generalChange the preposition
into
,.
it is seen that at dinner there is Change the punctuation
,
.
highest
level of harmful ingredients like sodium and saturated fat Add an article
the highest
while
at breakfast all 3 kinds of unhealthy remains
at the minimum level.
From Change the verb form
remain
analyhzing
the graphs we can see that sodium and saturated fat is at their peak of 43% and 37% respectively in dinner, Correct your spelling
analysing
whereas
snack contains the maximum ratio of added sugar of 42%. At lunch
the first two Add a comma
,lunch
nutrients
exist on a little more than a quarter while
the rest ingredient exists on one fifth
.
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one-fifth
Furthermore
, breakfast has lowest
proportion of the mentioned Change the article
the lowest
nutrients
of
around 15%. At the same time, Change preposition
apply
although
snack is high on
added sugar Change preposition
in
of
42%, Change preposition
apply
but
it has Remove the conjunction
apply
lower
percentage of the rest two Add an article
a lower
nutrients
at 14% and 21% respectively.Submitted by pappucdl on
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