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В целом, похоже, что в Кимсвилле деревьев было больше, но сегодня в городе строят разные здания. Еще одно поразительное изменение: деревья на северо-западной и юго-западной сторонах Кимсвилла были вырублены, и на их местах были построены новые квартиры и футбольный стадион соответственно. Завод справа от центра города снесли, а на его месте построили девелоперскую компанию. Кроме того, здание, которое в 2002 году было старым кинотеатром, было переоборудовано в паб. Последним интересным событием стало открытие железнодорожного вокзала на западе от центра города. Однако торговый центр на севере города остался без изменений.
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