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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime drama are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas

#countries #crime #novels #tv #drama #books #fiction #dramas
Majority
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viewers
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of viewers
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 of
telvision
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television
 programs and voracious book readers enjoy the content which
centers
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 around
crime
. Indeed, the suspense of these stories captivates
audience
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the audience
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 to watch these series till the end. I strongly agree that in many countries today,
crime
 novels and TV
crime
 dramas are becoming more and more popular. Indeed, most of these episodes are based on
real life
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 stories and
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help
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 to spread awareness among people.
Additionally
,
crime
 reporting tendency has gradually increased after watching
such
series
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a series
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.
Firstly
, in these modern times with proper
tecnology
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technology
 usage, awareness about
particular
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the particular
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 incident can be easily achieved.
For instance
, a popular drama titled '
Crime
 Patrol' depicts numerous acts which are
henious
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heinous
 in nature. All different types of
such
 acts are covered and telecasted. Indeed, television series which showcase criminal incidents have a strong impact on viewers
mind
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minds
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 resulting in being vigilant and
congnizant
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cognizant
.
Secondly
,
majority
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the majority
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people
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of people
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 are hesitant to inform respective
authoities
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authorities
 regarding the ongoing acts around them which are unlawful. To exemplify
this
, bribery in government offices is prominent.
Officals
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Officials
 demand
bribe
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bribes
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 openly, which leads to
inconvinience
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inconvenience
 for
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the task
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task
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 to be completed.
However
, openly and confidently strong voice is being raised against it, red-
handledly
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handled
 officers are being punished. As a matter of fact, the freedom and courage to respond against wrong
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 popularised because of the novels and drama. To sum up, media has always played a significant part to sharpen our knowledge about various streams including the increased
crime
 happening around in society. Short informative stories and serials could be introduced.
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