In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or diasgree with this statement?

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In today's era, technology has become an
indespensable
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indispensable
part of every person life.
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, it is sometimes thought
people
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will prefer e-news and e-
books
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. In my opinion, I considered that electronic reading sources have immense benefits and in the
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everyone wants online news as
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well
as
books
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. There are several reasons why
people
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are choosing to read news from online
wesites
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websites
. The
first
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and foremost important thing is that they can save money.
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, they can read anytime and anywhere.
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, during travelling, they read
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in
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their mobile phones and they just need
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an only
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internet
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connection.
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, on public
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newspapers are not printed, so
people
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have to wait till
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next
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the next
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day, while
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this
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situation will not happen
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online. Another point to consider
people
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want to read
from
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online means it is
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convenient and easy way. Sometimes
bookes
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books
are not in stock in the book store,
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why students or teachers do not get important
books
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on time whereas they do not have to face
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this difficulties
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when they have e-
books
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.
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, some expensive
books
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are not affordable for everyone.
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, a survey has conducted in the UK, 50% of students across the world that they deprive of higher
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education
and the reason is that only high cost of
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.
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, every garden has weeds, it has
also
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some
drawabcks
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drawbacks
.
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, there are some
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authors
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who
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do not allow
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their
books
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online.
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, it is true that
people
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will not purchase printed
books
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and newspapers as it is available online without paying, but
the
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importance
of
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them
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should not neglect.
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