The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs provide the
number
of
students
in two different categories who enrol in the university of Australia over a decade year.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
number
of overseas
students
experienced
increase
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an increase
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gradually
whereas
local
students
had
unchanged
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an unchanged
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trend over the period. Looking first at the enrolments of overseas
students
. There was a steady increase in total
students
which was from 20,000 to just over 80,000 in 2001 and 2010 respectively.
In addition
, the
number
of
students
who commence in Australian universities rose steadily over the period,with the exception
in
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of
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2009 and 2010. Moving on to the enrolments of local
students
. The total
number
of local
students
started at 40,000
students
and
then
there was a slight increase from around 45,000 to approximately 58,000
students
in 2001 and 2006 respectively. After 2008 the total
number
reached a plateau
between
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just over 60,000.
Furthermore
, the
number
of
students
who apply to Australian universities witnessed a fluctuating trend. There was a significant rise from about 18,000 to 22,000 in 2001 and 2002 and
then
they dropped slightly to about 19000 in 2006. After 2006, the
number
of
students
rose again to 22,000 in 2008 before declining to 21000 in the
last
years.
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