Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extend you agree or disagree?

Some argue that a fast-wide development of

supermarket

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in some states may cause

disadvanteges

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disadvantages

disadvantage

to local

people

. The capability of small and local

business

are

minim

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compare

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to those supermarkets from national or even

interanational

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international

coorporation

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corporation

. I do not agree with that statement, because there are many positive impacts of

supermarket

growth for society, in general, and local communities. I will discuss these below followed by reason and example.

To begin

with, big commercial markets

are usually contain

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various and branded products that allowed consumers to pick as they wanted to do.

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, there

are

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three

brand

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of chicken

nugget

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in

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the supermarket

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supermarket

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supermarkets

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with three different prices and

quality

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qualities

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, so that

buyer

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buyers

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might choose

belongs

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to their needs and budgets. But, in small local

business

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businesses

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, the choice is quite limited so it may not

satisfied

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consumers as they wish. Another reason, in

modern

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market

, there are often made discount or flash sale that invite many more

people

to spend money in here. In conclusion,

this

type of

market

is likely more popular and give many advantages to the community in general.

Furthermore

, the broke of local

people

because of

uncompetent

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incompetent

enough to compete with new-style of

market

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the market

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may bring them to another sector of

business

that can not be replaced by

supermarket

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a supermarket

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. Raising traditional and

culture

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cultural

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values as the

specialty

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speciality

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might be a choice.

For instance

, sailing traditional clothes, food,or furniture with

culture

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curves in the reliefs is unic and

unreplacable

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unreplaceable

. It

demonstrate

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the strength of locals and

preserve

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culture

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the culture

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and traditional aspect

of

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them

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. In the other words,

fast

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the fast

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growth of

modern

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market

is actually might encourage local society to be creative and enhance their values. To sum up, the

world wide

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growth of

supermaket

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supermarket

is actually give

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many positive issues to the

people

in general and locals, because not only

it

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provides much easier way to shopping for the consumers, but

also

encourage the creativity and enthusiasm of local

people

to develop

business

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a business

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based on

culture

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values.