Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school. Some people believe that this is a negative development while others think there are some benefits. Discuss both views and give your opinion .

These days جملة لتعميم الموضوع . So,some
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that الرأي الاخر .
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essay will discuss Both sides and will draw my personal conclusion . الطرف الغير مؤيد ( Unsupportive party) In one hand الجملة الرئسيه للفكرة ، ( ssتوضيح الفكرة).
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, مثال على الفكرة .so,
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why some think that الرأي يساند الفكرة . الطرف المؤيد ( Supporter )
On the other hand
, الجملة الرئسية , ss توضيح الفكرة . To illustrate , مثال على الفكرة .
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the belief that رأي مساند .
In addition
جملة الرئسية ، ss توضيح الفكرة . For an instanc , مثال على فكرة .
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proves clearly that الرأي المساند . الخاتمة ( Conclusion ) In conclusion , after a careful analysis of both
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, l believe that الرأي الشخصي ، ss جملة ختامية .
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