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Some people spend most of their life living close to where they are born. What might be the reason for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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It is always
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 of discussion whether an individual should prefer to leave near to their
hometown
 where he was born or else live in a place
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 offers opportunities for building
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 career or business. In
this
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 we will discuss
about
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the pros and cons of staying near our native towns. On one hand, the major
benefits
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 of people spending their life at their
hometown
 is that they stay
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 to their family and friends and
this
 let them to bond with their loved ones.
Moreover
, a person can visit their parents and relatives more often and stay in touch with them. According to the survey conducted by the
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 management university
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 that 45 % of respondents wanted to settle near to their
hometown
 as they are aware
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 the wellbeing of their parents and social issues that are pertaining to the town. On other hand, an individual who has been shifted away from their native tend to feel a sense of isolation and remains
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 from their family and companions.
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,
this
 may lead to depression, anxiety and
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 issues which can affect the person’s Productivity at work.
Hence
 it is acceptable that students studying far from their respective town feel homesick and prefer taking at their
hometown
 To sum up, despite
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 of benefits of living
at
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 your native place, it is an individual choice of staying near their
hometown
 and connected with his family and well-wishers or else undertake an employment opportunity aboard and full fill their dreams.
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