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Most Modern Families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents What is the reason for this? What problems can this cause?

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Nowadays in many
families
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 it's been observed that
both
parents
 are working to provide for their household.
As a
result
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this
 has led to many
issues
. In
this
essay
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 I will be discussing the main reason for
this phenomena
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and what problems come with it .
To begin
 with , in recent years the cost of living has hit skyrocket so in order to have and maintain a decent
life
both
parents
 are obligated to work so the family will have a stable financial income.
Therefore
 ,
this
 has brought many
issues
 for our youngsters.
First
 and foremost,
children
 with
both
parents
 working lack parental guidance and feel neglected by their
parents
.
As a
result
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children
 will turn to other people for guidance and these individuals may influence them in a bad manner .
For example
 , the American
society
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 for the positive care of
children
 had published an article that showed a correlation between
children
 becoming violent and aggressive in school and lack of parental supervision.
moreover
,
children
 will grow up not having the love and the support of
parents
 in
issues
 that they face in daily
life
. In
return
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 they will end up with weak personalities and no emotional bond
to
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 their
parents
 and
this
 will affect their relationship with their own
children
 in the future.
Furthermore
,
children
 may feel abandoned by their
parents
 and not loved. Due to the fact that
parents
 do not have the time available to care for their
children
 sufficiently.
Also
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children
 may perform poorly at school because
parents
 are busy working and no one is paying attention to the child's education.
As a
result
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 they may not have good qualifications to get a decent job .
In addition
 to that
parents
 may argue about whose job is more important and who needs to take time off for domestic
issues
 which may lead to
a
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distress in the home and eventually
this
 will affect
children
 in a negative way. To sum up,
bescuse
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because
 of the increases in the daily
life
 cost , in most houses
both
parents
 have to work to provide for their offspring.
This
 has led to many
issues
 that will affect mainly our youngsters in their adult
life
 later on.
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