Most Modern Families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents What is the reason for this? What problems can this cause?

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Nowadays in many
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it's been observed that
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parents
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are working to provide for their household.
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this
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has led to many
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I will be discussing the main reason for
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and what problems come with it .
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with , in recent years the cost of living has hit skyrocket so in order to have and maintain a decent
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both
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parents
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are obligated to work so the family will have a stable financial income.
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has brought many
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for our youngsters.
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and foremost,
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with
both
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parents
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working lack parental guidance and feel neglected by their
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.
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result
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children
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will turn to other people for guidance and these individuals may influence them in a bad manner .
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, the American
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for the positive care of
children
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had published an article that showed a correlation between
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becoming violent and aggressive in school and lack of parental supervision.
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,
children
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will grow up not having the love and the support of
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in
issues
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that they face in daily
life
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they will end up with weak personalities and no emotional bond
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their
parents
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and
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will affect their relationship with their own
children
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in the future.
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,
children
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may feel abandoned by their
parents
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and not loved. Due to the fact that
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do not have the time available to care for their
children
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sufficiently.
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Also
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children
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may perform poorly at school because
parents
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are busy working and no one is paying attention to the child's education.
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result
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they may not have good qualifications to get a decent job .
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to that
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may argue about whose job is more important and who needs to take time off for domestic
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which may lead to
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distress in the home and eventually
this
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will affect
children
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in a negative way. To sum up,
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because
of the increases in the daily
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cost , in most houses
both
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parents
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have to work to provide for their offspring.
This
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has led to many
issues
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that will affect mainly our youngsters in their adult
life
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later on.
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