For the past year you have been a member of a local club. Now want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter:

#year #member #club #membership #secretary

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Joe, My name is Elyn and I am a member of the Royal

Club

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since 2015, my member ID is 1122. I am writing

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letter to inform you regarding the termination of my membership from the Royal

Club

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in London, due to

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personal reasons. As I mentioned, I was a regular member of

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community for a

quiet

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long time but past

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year I was busy with my work and could not make it regularly to the

club

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. I hold a premium membership card which

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was purchased at the time of the joining.

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payment of $300 was done by cash and later every month $150 was debited from my account. If you want I can submit the receipts and bank transactions history for reference. Apart from

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, I would like to express my sincere thanks to the

club

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's fitness centre and the coach. I have benefited a lot from doing daily exercises and the fitness equipment is really useful and

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premium quality. The weight loss program conducted at

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club

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was successful for me and

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loss

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almost 10 kgs all thanks to the fitness team.

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, I gained friends from

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community and we are still in touch. It is really

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to discontinue from

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esteemed

club

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I need to relocate to my new hometown Stanford which is about 100 km far from

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place. I hope the Royal

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will soon open its new venture in my new hometown. If you need any additional information please feel free to contact me. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Elyn

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

269 words

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