An English-speaking friend has written to you to ask you how your IELTS studies are going. Write a letter telling your friend how you are preparing for the test. In your letter: say what progress you are making explain how you are preparing for the test say which section you are finding the most difficult You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows:

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Dear Jack
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so busy at my work. I had
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two weeks ago. It's almost a bit hard but I think that I get a good grade
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so studying. IELTS includes four sections Reading, writing, listening and speaking. I have begun to study English
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. for preparing
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exam I learn more than 3000
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I Enveloped my
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I have two
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are very useful
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me. They gave me lots of
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, so that I had to study late and I was sleeping a little. The most difficult
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for me was listening.
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podcasts for exercising at night. After two months I could understand simple conversations. and I enjoyed it
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I was able to
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simple texts which I heard. I was
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in English more. Do you know in my country we can have IELTS exams once or
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I had the exam and I got a good
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It's about 7.5 I think. I'
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so happy. Thank you again With best wishes, Mehran
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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