You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to parents. In your letter 1. Explain you would like the job 2. give details of why you would be suitable person to employ 3. say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir,

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is regarding your advertisement published in Australian magazine dated on 16.12.2021 for the requirement of child care person. My name is Shravan, I am a resident of Mira road and I will be interested in

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position. Sir, I like to spend time with the children and currently looking for a similar job profile.

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, I am a certified professional in the hospitality of young children. I have been given very structured training to understand child psychology and their needs, And

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and activities which will help children to learn and grow. I have almost six years of experience in child care in which I have always stayed with the family at least for 7 months. As already mentioned I am a certified professional, So I spend time with kids in a very organized way by doing numerous activities, like playing puzzles, going for

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with kids in the garden, doing some outdoor activities to make them fit, involving them with their friends to enhance their social skills.

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follow a very healthy diet plan for them in order to keep them healthy. Yours faithfully Shravan Yadav

shravan30999Thu Dec 16 2021

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Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

197 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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The Greeting

Some people think that hosting international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Small shops in towns and villages are closing and are being replaced by big stores. Do you think it is a good or a bad trend? Explain your opinion.

It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?