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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Schools from different countries may face problems with student behaviour.
This
 essay will explain the reasons for
this
 and suggests some methods to solve the problem. On the one hand, there are two key causes for
this
 phenomenon. The main reason is that many
parents
 nowadays have to work for the whole day. As
parents
 tend to work from dawn to dusk, they do not have much time to get along with their
children
, so they may not realise that their
children
 are impolite and rude.
As a result
, when
students
 go to school, they may speak rudely to their classmates. Another reason is
because of
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the advancement of technology. Nowadays there are a lot of electronic devices,
students
 can watch movies and videos online. Sometimes, when teens watch
some
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violence
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 movies, they may learn from
it
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 and speak impolitely to their classmates or even use some improper
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.
Therefore
, it will affect their behaviour.
On the other hand
, there are two ways to tackle the problem.
Firstly
, schools can hold some family activities which allow
parents
 to get along with their
children
.
Parents
 may realise some bad behaviours of their
children
 while playing with different activities so they will correct their bad habits. Adults will try to focus more on them in the future, which can prevent teenagers to have bad manners at school.
Moreover
,
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video
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videos
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 should be censored before giving to teenagers. When the
violence
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 or sex-related video are filtered,
students
 will not be able to learn
these kind
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 of improper
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 like foul languages, so they will not behave poorly at school. To conclude, there are a few reasons why there are problems with
students
 behaviour at schools,
however
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 there are still solutions to prevent
this
 from happening.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parental guidance
  • discipline
  • moral guidance
  • social media
  • detrimental
  • bullying
  • peer pressure
  • overcrowded
  • disengagement
  • disruptive behavior
  • behavioral policies
  • code of conduct
  • parental involvement
  • social and emotional learning (SEL)
  • empathy
  • responsible decisions
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