Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There are some
languages
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, which are going to be overthrown because the number of
people
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who are speaking these
languages
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are
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few. Some
people
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though
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thought
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, the
government
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should specify a specific amount of public money to save these
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,
on the other hand
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, other groups of
people
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believe it is just wasting of money. According to my opinion,
this
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is a normal process. Every
language
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and its speakers have a specific time after that time, they are going to be extinct ,
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however
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if we keep the
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alive
that is
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a good idea, which can help a culture related to
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to be alive.
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, the
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should put other things
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priority
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a priority
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.
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, health issues, the
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, unemployed
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and in the end the issue of culture and
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. Because
people
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can't live without some essential staff for life, to say
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, if a
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demolish
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demolishes
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people
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would be able to continue their life. But if they have problems in regard to health or the
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they would encounter too many
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difficulties.
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, if the
government
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work in regards to cultures and
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it can help to have more tourists,which is a good source of income. Because when a
language
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is going to vanish, the culture related to
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will
also
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extinct.
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, the interest of tourists will decrease cause there wouldn't be anything interested in tourism, which has a direct effect on the
economy
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especial in the country, where there most of the income comes from tourism. To sum up the topic,
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is not a bad idea to spend money on
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to be alive if the
government
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has a good
economy
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and their income stand on tourism.
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