Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable many people like to travel to other countries
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they love to explore more nowadays,
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had begun more popular and
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marking a positive impact on the individual countries economy.
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, the local shop owners
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get benefited from the visitor.According to my point of view
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it has a positive impact but,
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it has some minor drawbacks. moving on let's discuss both views and
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I'll give relevant points where I agree.
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, the all tourist countries economy was completely shattered due to covid 19 now, things got normal they demand tourist due to
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they provide budget-friendly packages to attract more visitors
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through
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they manage the local shops' owners to earn.
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, some
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visitors may bring some drawbacks due to covid restrictions still individuals believed it may bring virus again.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural exchanges
  • Global connections
  • Tourism boosts
  • Local economy
  • Over-tourism
  • Environmental degradation
  • Landmarks
  • Commodification of culture
  • Authentic cultural expressions
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Tourism infrastructure
  • Public services
  • Disrespect local customs
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