Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development

Politicians, large organizations, and business

people

have been striving to promote their products and their purposes to

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society in recent years.

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phenomenon appears to be global and I believe it has detrimental effects on the population. There are innumerable drawbacks of advertising to the community.

Firstly

, it distracts the observers’ concentration and affects their productivity

while

working.

For example

, a student, who is using the internet to collect relevant information, would certainly be distracted by some fascinating ads, or annoying pop-ups which are designed to draw their attention.

This

is

not to mention

that

such

long commercial advertisements can swallow up an intense amount of their time.

Secondly

, the advertiser can influence

people

’s thinking through their publications. The political

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; these tend to provide only some parts of the

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, with the aim to control the perceiver’s feelings and

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opinions about the particular issue

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subjective.

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rallies and

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social unrest

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the community.

Finally

, the new methods of advertising are causing negative impacts on young

people

, especially adolescents and children. With the support of technology, advertisers can now promote their

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products

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to the exact

people

who will be interested. Teenagers and children,

however

, are those who spend a large amount of time on these websites. They are still mentally weak, and may not be able to prevent themselves from drifting to these ads, which might be pornographies or toxic information. I do appreciate the fact that many advertisements present good products, deliver a meaningful message, or provide

people

with relevant knowledge. But I believe these pieces of information can be found

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other patterns, which would not affect their time and concentration. In conclusion, I personally think that the rapid development of advertising,

although

brings some particular benefits to

people

, is still a negative trend

due to

the numerous impacts it has on the population.