Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities around the world are now "one big traffic jam". How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Nowadays,
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many years it gives the problem of big traffic
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First
of all. people need
cars
to move from one place to another place.
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, people are working or studying,
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way of transport.
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cars
problem, they can share their
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, fellows. Another solution is that the government has to provide easy access
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like trains and buses.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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