Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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Nowadays, the population is increasing rapidly,

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more houses are needed. Some communities have enough money or excess to design or buy high-quality dwellings that

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a long time. Others just want to find cheap accommodations to live in. I believe that the houses should be built carefully before using. On the one hand, almost all the properties were carefully designed by architects, so every unit has a different style. A good building is usually made from good raw materials to give the occupants a rather impressive feeling. But, good quality buildings often come at an expensive or reasonable price. Big investments result in comfortable living as well as the least problems.

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, if a host wants to design or buy a good quality

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, the host and architects have to invest more time and money.

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the host will have a high-quality

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to live in for a long time.

On the other hand

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, some

people

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want to stay in a cheap

house

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which has a fast process of construction because they have low income or they just want a place where they can live, so cheap and quick

accommodation

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is the best choice for them.

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, cheap and quick

accommodation

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will provide them with more living options to choose from.

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the

accommodation

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may be cramped or of poor quality, it provides low-income

people

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with a safe dwelling.

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, many students or workers stay in a cheap place and in my country (Vietnam) many buildings were erected to serve the poor

people

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to live in. To sum up, I believe that having a high-quality

house

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is likely to be better in the long-term. Cheap and quick

accommodation

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is a better choice for

people

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who have low income.

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