the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

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of those individuals who

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the Ashdown Museum during the year before

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after it was refurbished.

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, the pie charts illustrate the output of surveys conducted

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in which they were asked about how satisfied they were with the

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, during the equal two periods. In general, the immediate impression from the table is that the

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of

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experienced a significant rise after refurbishment from 7400 to 9200.

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increase was not limited to only the

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after asking people about the quality of their

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, their responses show that the amount of satisfaction, at a glance, saw a substantial increase. In regard to

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satisfaction, the

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of individuals who were very satisfied with their

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rocketed up from 15% to 35%.

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, those people who were satisfied rose by 10%, in more detail, it saw a growth from 30% to 40%. The result of surveys of

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’ dissatisfaction;

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decreasing. By way of illustration, the

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of

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who were dissatisfied after visiting the museum plunged from 40% to 15%.

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who were dissatisfied after seeing the museum,

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, halved from 10% to 5%.

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but not least, some people preferred to give no response to questions before and after the refurbishment which the amount of them remained unchanged.