the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

The table demonstrates the

number

of those individuals who

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the Ashdown Museum during the year before

as well as

after it was refurbished.

Furthermore

, the pie charts illustrate the output of surveys conducted

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visitors

in which they were asked about how satisfied they were with the

visit

, during the equal two periods. In general, the immediate impression from the table is that the

number

of

visitors

experienced a significant rise after refurbishment from 7400 to 9200.

In addition

,

this

increase was not limited to only the

number

of

visitors

, but

also

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after asking people about the quality of their

visit

, their responses show that the amount of satisfaction, at a glance, saw a substantial increase. In regard to

the

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satisfaction, the

number

of individuals who were very satisfied with their

visit

rocketed up from 15% to 35%.

Additionally

, those people who were satisfied rose by 10%, in more detail, it saw a growth from 30% to 40%. The result of surveys of

visitors

’ dissatisfaction;

as a result

,

were

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decreasing. By way of illustration, the

number

of

visitors

who were dissatisfied after visiting the museum plunged from 40% to 15%.

Visitors

who were dissatisfied after seeing the museum,

moreover

, halved from 10% to 5%.

Last

but not least, some people preferred to give no response to questions before and after the refurbishment which the amount of them remained unchanged.