Many wild birds and animals lives in town s and cities . Some people think thatthe wildlife should be protected . Some ghink that they should be removed . Discuss both of view and gives your opinion

Some commentators say that wild
animals
should be away from
metropolis
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but others opine is that they should keep in safe places . According to my
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prospective
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, species should
be keep
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in
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a zoo
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zoo
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where they can live and feed easily and safely.
To begin
with , some
animals
are dangerous for
human
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a human
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being
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. To elaborate it, they should be
hamless
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harmless
for
people
in cities.They can make a big obstacle for individuals.
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, while driving sometimes deers run from
farm
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and came at front of
vehicle
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and
then
accidents happen. It can cause the death of
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the driver
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driver
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.so that, they should
away
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from town for
protection
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the protection
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of the life of
people
. .with
this
society can stay safely.
Furthermore
,according to some
people
,
animals
should be protected. It is true that birds and
animals
are
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an asset
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asset
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of
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country
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but sometimes it
make
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a big issue for society
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instance,
rat
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spread the major infectious disease plague which
cause
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so many death .covid is
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spread
spreaded
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by bad.
Thus
,
government
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should take steps to overcome
this
problem. They should make a zoo which can provide the same environment and diet to them so that they can
habitate
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habitat
like
natural
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the natural
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environment.They should
orovide
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provide
vatener
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fastener
doctors to them so they can be treated safely. They should provide proper security in
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the zoo
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zoo
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zoos
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so
people
can see them safely. In conclusion,
although
some
animals
are dangerous for human life yet they should keep them in safe places because they are
our
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assets and
beauty
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the beauty
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of our country.
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