You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a faily for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents.In your letter Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Mr & Mrs John, My name is Radhika and am writing

this

letter in regard to the job posting I came across recently in an Australian magazine. The specifications listed out interested me in applying for the same.Am currently looking out for short term employment and

this

job profile matches my requirements.

Also

,I stay alone in a rented flat as my son is working in a different country.I would be joining him in the

six months.Since

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I have more time for the stay-in job I would like to give it a try for

this

opportunity. I have prior experience working in day-care centres and the knowledge gained during my previous work will greatly help in taking care of your child as well as better understanding and fulfilling the kid's needs.The other qualities I possess that would best suit

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position is reliability,caring,friendly nature and trustworthiness.

In addition

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letter, I have attached my past experience and conduct certificates issued by the previous employer for your reference. Since

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It's going to be a few months of stay in Australia I would like to spend some quality time with my friends and neighbours during my leisure time and some shopping before

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leave. I will look forward to receiving a positive response from you and I can assure you that you will not be disappointed in selecting me. Thank you, Radhika

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

229 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
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