Some countries have come up with law to restrict the working hours of an employee. What is the reason for this ? Is that positive or negative ?

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around the world even smart work or hard work.
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working
hours
for their's
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employees
. There are so many reasons for
this
trend and I think
this
is a positive for both the
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authority
as well as the workers
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briefly for the following reasons. There are some reasons for reducing the working
hours
.
Firstly
,
this
can lead to giving more adequate personal
time
for labours.
Secondly
, reducing working
hours
can provide a
time
for workers doing the physical activity for their's health-purpose,
thus
, the
productivity
must be increased undoubtedly.
For example
, Norway follows the six-hour working policy,
thus
,
this
country earns more than 40% of the profit to compared
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working schedule.
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, reducing
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working
time
is a positive for both the employees and the authority
similarly
.
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Employees
Employers
have to work with full enthusiasm and
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because they
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not any depression and stress,
as a result
,
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productivity
would be expanded dramatically.
For instance
, one of the Japan famous company which is Microsoft labours working
hours
is only five
hours
per day in order to the
productivity
increases tremendously than any other
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. To conclude, optimizing working
hours
can give more benefits for workers and employers
similarly
.
This
gives tremendous
productivity
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labours' enthusiasm, having
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adequate personal
time
for relaxation.
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Therefore
, in my opinion, about
this
,
this
is a positive improvement undoubtedly. I hope
this
process is conducive to building a healthy society.
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