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Band 5

News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

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It is true that the
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 of
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 editor is the final judgment of the
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 report, which is broadcasted to our media like television and newspaper. There are
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numerous factors that
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 these decisions.
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, it can be argued that good
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 may bring peace and happiness to a nation.
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, perhaps most
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editors
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 want to increase the selling of their newspapers in order to rapidly rise up their profit.
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, popularity and true
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 are other significant factors, which influence the
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editors
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 to make a
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, some
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editors
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 of developing countries are affected by the political governments to
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 a
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 about their
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 report. Recently, we see that many newspapers and televisions channels are publishing bad
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.
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, many media's, Aaj Tak and Republic TV,
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 in India, are always broadcasting about the in's and out of celebrities life, which is neither informative nor important.
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,
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 type of
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 spoils the life of an adult person. If the media provides good
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such
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 as educational, scientific and so on, these can motivate the younger to achieve more knowledge.
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 could result in the immense
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development
 of a country. In conclusion, while
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editors
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 are inspired by
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several factors to make a
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 about a
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 report, it can be argued that good
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 is more indispensable than bad
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.
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,
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editor
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editors
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 should broadcast and print
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 of
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, which can bring many benefits to
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human being.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Engagement
  • Relevance
  • Urgency
  • Natural disasters
  • Political upheavals
  • Public health concerns
  • Advertising revenue
  • Sponsorship deals
  • Market competition
  • Editorial policies
  • Censorship
  • Newsworthy
  • Desensitization
  • Bad news fatigue
  • Negativity bias
  • Balanced view
  • Social media
  • Viral content
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