In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?

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It is obvious that a huge number of
experts
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relocating from the countries which are under development over the
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few decades because they intend to believe if they opt to rich countries they will get better opportunities and get a high-class job.
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secondly
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, will find out potential solutions how to approach
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with,migrating skilled
experts
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from a developing
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is a very common issue in recent years and it's a great loss for any
country
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because
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lost their highly
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expert who can lead a
nation
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for
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becoming a
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nation
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they gain knowledge-based schooling in their
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,In the name of getting
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degree or taking higher
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they move to rich countries.
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,
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in a
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third
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-world
country
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like Bangladesh every year huge number
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student
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students
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and
expert
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experts
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going
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abroad with a view to taking knowledge-based
education
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.even after, completing
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they never come back
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home to serve the
nation
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. for high-paying jobs and a
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standard
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they intend to settle themsel in that state.
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, the
country
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lost brilliant
experts
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who can able to provide better service to the
nation
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,there are many ways to overcome
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issue.
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,for retaining
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brilliant students in own
country
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must spread great quality of
education
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over the
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and for
experts
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make a nice ambience with handsome paying.
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, the student, who with to opt to higher
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must need to given pre-condition that after finishing
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should return to home for the interest of the nations.
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, after ,all
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ought to create a sense of devotion to the people. To conclude, who does not go to be great.it is a very common tendency
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the human being but to protect brain drain home
country
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must provide better facilities and make sense of devotion for the
country
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