In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?

It is obvious that a huge number of
experts
relocating from the countries which are under development over the
last
few decades because they intend to believe if they opt to rich countries they will get better opportunities and get a high-class job.
However
,In
this
essay
firstly
, will examine
this
problem
then
secondly
, will find out potential solutions how to approach
this
issue.
To begin
with,migrating skilled
experts
from a developing
country
is a very common issue in recent years and it's a great loss for any
country
because
country
lost their highly
skill
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expert who can lead a
nation
for
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becoming a
progress
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nation
.
although
they gain knowledge-based schooling in their
country
,In the name of getting
PhD
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degree or taking higher
education
they move to rich countries.
for instance
,
a
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third
-world
country
like Bangladesh every year huge number
brilliant
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student
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students
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and
expert
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experts
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going
to
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abroad with a view to taking knowledge-based
education
.even after, completing
education
they never come back
to
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home to serve the
nation
. for high-paying jobs and a
standred
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standard
lifestyle
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they intend to settle themsel in that state.
Thus
, the
country
lost brilliant
experts
who can able to provide better service to the
nation
.
In contrast
,there are many ways to overcome
this
issue.
firstly
,for retaining
a
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brilliant students in own
country
must spread great quality of
education
over the
country
and for
experts
make a nice ambience with handsome paying.
secondly
, the student, who with to opt to higher
education
must need to given pre-condition that after finishing
education
should return to home for the interest of the nations.
Moreover
, after ,all
government
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ought to create a sense of devotion to the people. To conclude, who does not go to be great.it is a very common tendency
to
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the human being but to protect brain drain home
country
must provide better facilities and make sense of devotion for the
country
.
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