You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Jessica, I have received your invitation letter to visit you in your country, and I am writing now to get advice on your side about your preferable gifts.

Moreover

, I would like to know more detailed information on what concern the activities, clothes, and food there. Actually, I want to prepare a valuable gest to thank your family for their elegant request. Literally, I will be very glad if you give me some advice to choose the most convenient one.

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, tell me about your family’s interests. On the other side, I need to be prepared well for the visit, so I require to know the types of clothes that I would take with me.

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, What

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the possible activities that we can do there?

Finally

, I demand if it is possible to tell me more about your traditional food, on what they are relying on the most? Because you know that I am being a vegetarian for 3 years. On the whole, I heavily appreciate your call and I am very sure that we will have a beautiful time together. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, China Tarhini.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

10 paragraphs

196 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Structure your letter

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

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