YOu are going to another country to study. u wud like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. write a letter to this friend. in your letter: 1. give details of your study plans. 2. explain why you want to get a part-time job. 3. suggest how your friend could help you find a job:

#country #study #wud #job #friend #lives #help #plans

Dear Elyn, Hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to enquire about the possibilities of getting a part-time job in

Boston

. I got admission to

Boston

University for post-graduation in Management and classes will commence in January. As you know, to study and stay in a city like

Boston

, without a part-time job it would be too miserable.

Moreover

, I need to cover all my expenses including quarterly tuition fees, monthly rent for accommodation and food too.

In addition

to that, if I would work in a temporary role it gives me great exposure to work culture and connecting people. So that it will be useful for my internship. As an ex-employee of Macdonald at

Boston

, I hope you can recommend me to get a job.

However

, I have 3 years of experience in the packing section of Macdonald’s in India. If you would not mind please circulate with your peer group regarding

this

. I would be grateful if you help me in

this

matter. Appreciate your understanding in

this

matter. Hope to hear from you soon, Best Regards, Joe

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