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In many large cities, pelople waste hours of their time every day because of traffic congestion_on the roads. What are the causes of this? What solutions can yoj suggest?

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In urban
centers
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 over the world, it is wasted a lot of
time
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 due to
traffic
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 jams.
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 is a serious issue because it affects the well-being and the psychological of the
people
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.
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 essay will analyze the main problems of
traffic
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 jams and supposed two solutions. Perhaps, the top reason for
traffic
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 problems is the lack of public
transport
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. While being given several options, many
people
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 prefer to travel by car, because it is more quick and convenient. As result
traffic
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 jams emerge, especially on the most popular routes,
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, main
roads
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. Another key factor – the same schedule over the city. The majority of citizens begin and stop work or study at the same
time
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. It means that
roads
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 become overloaded at a specific
time
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 of the day,
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, rush hours on mornings or evenings. Fortunately, there are two promising reasons solutions for that problem.
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 of all, local
authorities
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 should invest more in local
transport
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.
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 makes it more convenient and reduces the number of cars on
roads
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.
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, in my city
authorities
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 created a web of bicycle
roads
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, which motivate
people
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 to commute by bicycle.
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, local
authorities
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 can introduce different working hours for schools and public institutions, which
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 reduces the number of
people
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 who are
traveling
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 at the same
time
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. In conclusion,
traffic
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 jam is a serious problem,
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 caused by the limited abilities of public
transport
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, along the similar work
time
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 of citizens. I recommend to the
authorities
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 to tackle the problem by investing in local
transport
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 and introducing shifted
time
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 of work in public institutions.
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