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Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take action. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people have the option that an individual effect alone is not enough to solve environmental
issues
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.While other believe that every individual needs to take their own action to stop environmental
issues
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. On one hand , individual action alone is not sufficient to stop the environmental
issues
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 because these
issues
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 are on a global scale.
Issues
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 like
air
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pollution
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 cannot be stoped by one person by not using his personal vehicle, the difference made by
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 is less significant to large problem.No use of plastic by that individuals will not reduce the risk to the
environment
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.
Efforts
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 like using electrical vehicles at a small scale will not reduce the effects of
air
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pollution
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 on the
environment
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.Small
efforts
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 like installing a solar panel at home can help generate green energy but won't reduce the overall effects caused by non-renewable energy on nature.
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 , the large scale of the population start taking their own action will make a much large effect.If the large set of population start using public transport , carpool etc. it can help the
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 a lot by reducing
air
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pollution
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 caused by the large number of car used by
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group
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 of individuals.
Group
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 of
pollution
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 using a cloth or recycled bag
instead
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 of plastic will help the climate by reducing plastic waste from the planet.
Group
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efforts
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 like a cleanliness drive on the beach can help marine life to a larger extend.Population together can make the decision to reduce the CO2 emissions caused by them.
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 individuals cannot stop the damage to the
environment
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 alone
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 made by my
group
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 of
the
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individual can help solve global environmental problems like
air
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pollution
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 , global warming etc.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental issues
  • sustainable habits
  • systemic industrial emissions
  • deforestation
  • sustainable operations
  • eco-friendly products
  • consumer demand
  • public advocacy
  • grassroots movements
  • legislative changes
  • conserve energy
  • reduce waste
  • recycling
  • supply chains
  • international cooperation
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