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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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It is said that schools should obligate unpaid
community
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 service as a part of high school programs. I strongly agree with
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 statement mainly because of improving
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'
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 reason is that
students
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 could have better job opportunities in the future. As
students
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 attend these voluntary activities, they learn to be more creative
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 and gain
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 which are valuable and practical for their future job. They,
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, could improve their CV and increase employability.
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,
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 of life
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 learned with participating in
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community
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 service. Making these activities obligatory could enforce
students
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 to be in situations that learn
skills
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 like effective communication with others. They
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 learn moral values like helping others after working for a charity or helping poor children with their studies.
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, some may argue that
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 do not have enough
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 for doing voluntary services. Schools have tight curriculums and
students
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 should expend a lot of
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 and energy doing their assignments and preparing for their examinations. They,
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, should concentrate on major subjects
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 as math and science
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 of doing
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extra curricular
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 activities.
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thesedays
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these days
students
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 spend most of their
time
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 sitting in front of the TV, browsing the internet or playing video games, so it is possible to manage their
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 to use effectively and participate in these
community
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 services. In conclusion, I think that it is beneficial for high school
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 to attend unpaid
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 service because it
prepare
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 them for their future job and
teach
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 them some life
skills
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compulsory
  • unpaid community service
  • charity
  • neighborhood improvement
  • teaching sports
  • empathy
  • social justice
  • transferable skills
  • teamwork
  • leadership
  • problem-solving
  • civic duty
  • civic engagement
  • educational enhancement
  • practical experiences
  • academic learning
  • real-world applications
  • social cohesion
  • mutual support
  • time management
  • balancing priorities
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