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Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

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Over the years international businesses have been increased and
this
 opens a way of cultural interaction between nations. Some believe
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 swap leads to
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 of the local's identity, while others believe that it has a huge positive impact on the community. In my opinion, the expansion of business overseas has a magnificent positive impact on every country. On the one hand, some believe that
this
 transaction of trades overseas leads to
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 of many good improvements in both economic and cultural interaction.
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in
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 a result leads to an increase in the awareness of people to
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 to some foreign experience in collaboration with their own local identity to create a better adapted one without erasing local practice.
For instance
, Sudan adapts some power-saving ideas from Egypt and
this
 lead to great
resources
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 saving plus improvements in the local income.
On the other hand
, some who consider that international business has a negative impact on the local skill argue that because more outsiders will live in the country and marge with the locals and that will lead to demolishing of the individual cultures. For ,example the overseas exchange between
qatar
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 and
indiia
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India
 has led over the years to evaporate Qatar identity and adapt to the Indian ability
such
 as food or dress or even behaviour. To conclude, the international transfer of business and
skill
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 have a major role in developing any country
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 the good of all mankind.
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