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Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in an area. Others believe that local councils should allow people to choose different designs for their houses. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #houses #style #area #councils #designs
A building
house
 is getting easier than before. Several new
construction
 solutions came into
this
 industry since 2000. Nowadays, people talk about green solutions and their infrastructures for newly planned
home
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homes
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. At
first
, let us talk about traditional
construction
 styles of
houses
. The most cases, the public usually used woods and bricks as the main materials for
construction
. Now it is changed a lot. There are several modern building materials able to purchase from the market for both individuals and companies.
Therefore
, they plan
firstly
 building
design
 and its
construction
 solution.
For example
, people can buy wood plastic composite
instead
 of
original
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 wood. It is cheaper and easy to install in any buildings.
In addition
, owners are able to integrate their new
house
 with renewable energy solutions in order to build
a
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green or hybrid
houses
.
Secondly
, in most places, I suppose that
a
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families have to verify their new
house
design
 and appearance with the local
community
 in order to fulfil their requirements. Obviously, the building
design
 will affect the development of the local
community
 and its infrastructure plan. So that residents can’t make a final decision by themselves because they live in the same
community
. Despite public
building
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, individuals can choose any
design
 and shape for their
houses
. It is 100
percent
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 their choices and depends on their financial capabilities. In my opinion, the local
community
 should have a master plan for their residents.
In other words
, the city council should determine the basic requirements of any building expansion and newly planned
houses
.
Finally
, I agree that people should follow the same style as older
houses
 if they need to build a new
house
next
 to old households.
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