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As well as making money , business also have social responsibility

#money #business #responsibility
It is a social responsibility for
bussiness
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business
 to improve the life of
people
 rather than
aim
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the aim
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 of just earn a profit.   Some
people
 say that
first
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 priority of
company
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the company
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 should be
fullfill
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fulfil
 their expanses.To elaborate it , organisations have to pay for employees wages, rents, bills,equipment charges and so on . To complete the running cost they have to invest money on
product
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a product
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 of
company
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the company
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.
In other words
,
for
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marketing and advertisements have to spend
huge
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a huge
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 amount.
Thus
, after
this
 corporation try to spend on needy
people
 or environment safety
for
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to
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improve
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improving
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 the life of
people
 It is clear that those
business
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businesses
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 run long time which
pay
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pays
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 attention
requirement
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requirements
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 of society. To explicate it,  Firms deduct the tax and
then
 pay for needy
people
 like
government
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the government
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 use it for medical, emergencies, disaster and education.
For instance
,
walmart
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Walmart
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 in
canada
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Canada
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 collect donation from customers and
then
, donate to
cancer
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a cancer
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 hospital and sick and homeless kids.They should plant the trees which will help to reduce pollution and help to improve the health of
people
 and reduce the
riskof
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risk of
 diseases.
Consequently
, it will improve the
life
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lives
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 of
community
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the community
a community
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. In conclusion,
although
 making money is
main
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the main
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 motive for
company
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the company
a company
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 but spending on society improvement is
also
 a responsibility for
business
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the business
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.
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