some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give opinions

Many people think that It is the best way to acknowledge any terrible circumstances in their

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a job that they are unsatisfied

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well as lack of money. While others disagree with the idea and think that they have to attempt and refine

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. In the following paragraph, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before the conclusion

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reached. On the one hand, the major reason that people believe that they should accept any bad situations is that they do not have

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opportunity

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in their

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In other words

, the majority of children who live with their poor families do not have the chance to study in school because they are scarce

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money.

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, they do not access any public services. To illustrate, many immigrants in Thailand have not obtained identification

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yet.

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, they do not have the right to do any jobs in Thailand illegally.

On the other hand

, one of the reasons that folk try to improve their awful circumstances is that they would like to have a better

life

.

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, some poor students attempt to work hard in order to acquire a scholarship to study, which will provide them

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chance to have good career paths. On top of that, They would like to be acceptable. In simple terms, many adults who were looked down on will try to make their

life

better and more admirable. To summarize,

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there are many reasons that people believe that they should accept unfavourable situations, I strongly agree that folk should improve those circumstances so that their

life

will be better and more acceptable.