some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give opinions
Many people think that It is the best way to acknowledge any terrible circumstances in their
Use synonyms
life
, Replace the word
lives
for
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instance
a job that they are unsatisfiedAdd the comma(s)
,instance
, as
well as lack of money. While others disagree with the idea and think that they have to attempt and refine Change preposition
with, as
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this situations
. In the following paragraph, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before the conclusion Change the determiner
this situation
these situations
in
reached.
On the one hand, the major reason that people believe that they should accept any bad situations is that they do not have Correct your spelling
is
good
Add an article
a good
opportunity
in their Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
life
. Use synonyms
In other words
, the majority of children who live with their poor families do not have the chance to study in school because they are scarce Linking Words
of
money. Change preposition
with
Moreover
, they do not access any public services. To illustrate, many immigrants in Thailand have not obtained identification Linking Words
card
yet. Fix the agreement mistake
cards
As a result
, they do not have the right to do any jobs in Thailand illegally.
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On the other hand
, one of the reasons that folk try to improve their awful circumstances is that they would like to have a better Linking Words
life
. Use synonyms
For example
, some poor students attempt to work hard in order to acquire a scholarship to study, which will provide them Linking Words
the
chance to have good career paths. On top of that, They would like to be acceptable. In simple terms, many adults who were looked down on will try to make their Add the preposition
with the
life
better and more admirable.
To summarize, Use synonyms
although
there are many reasons that people believe that they should accept unfavourable situations, I strongly agree that folk should improve those circumstances so that their Linking Words
life
will be better and more acceptable.Use synonyms
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