Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?
In the 21st century, human
life
became more complex and a
competitive. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, human being likes to live their
favourite places Change preposition
in their
for
Change preposition
to
generate
good social Change the verb form
generating
life
. In this
essay, I will explain what is the reason and problems related to human migration
.
However
, people
moving
from one place to another Wrong verb form
move
for
getting Change preposition
to
better
choice of Correct article usage
a better
life
such
as good education, health benefit and higher living standard. Admittedly, natural hazards like tsunami,earthquake and environmental pollution and man-made problems like destruction of nuclear
power station, Add an article
the nuclear
a nuclear
spread
of diseases Add an article
the spread
leads
to widespread movement of Change the verb form
lead
people
.For example
, in Russia, the Chernobl
nuclear power station destruction caused more than 3 million Correct your spelling
Chernobyl
people
's migration
to different
Add an article
a different
part
of the country as well as other Fix the agreement mistake
parts
european
nations. Ostensively, there is a growing tendency of Change the capitalization
European
people
's movement to developed
country for making money or getting jobs.
Add an article
a developed
Moroever
, most of the leading cities now facing overpopulation and Correct your spelling
Moreover
higher
rate of crime because of excessive human Add an article
a higher
migration
. Reportedly, religious intolerance and terrorism are one of the major social problem
that curtails the peaceful Change to a plural noun
problems
life
of society. To illustrate this
, according to Interpol report of 2018 points out that 70% of terrorist attacks in UK
,France and America Correct article usage
the UK
caused
by illegal migrated Add a missing verb
are caused
people
. On the other hand
, the more people
settled
down in Wrong verb form
settle
a specific regions
, it will definitely Correct the article-noun agreement
specific regions
a specific region
abolished
the natural resources and Change the verb form
abolish
other living organism
.
In conclusion, there is a saying 'a coin has two Change the wording
another living organism
other living organisms
sides'
Correct your spelling
sides
similarly
, migration
creates constructive and destructive changes in our society. Although
, it is the responsibility of government authority and the local people
to protect their own country and also
generate human resources for future development.Submitted by sooryag03 on
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