Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

In the 21st century, human
life
became more complex and
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competitive.
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, human being likes to live
their
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good social
life
. In
this
essay, I will explain what is the reason and problems related to human
migration
.
However
,
people
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from one place to another
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getting
better
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choice of
life
such
as good education, health benefit and higher living standard. Admittedly, natural hazards like tsunami,earthquake and environmental pollution and man-made problems like destruction of
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power station,
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of diseases
leads
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to widespread movement of
people
.
For example
, in Russia, the
Chernobl
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Chernobyl
nuclear power station destruction caused more than 3 million
people
's
migration
to
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part
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of the country as well as other
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nations. Ostensively, there is a growing tendency of
people
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country for making money or getting jobs.
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Moreover
, most of the leading cities now facing overpopulation and
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rate of crime because of excessive human
migration
. Reportedly, religious intolerance and terrorism are one of the major social
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that curtails the peaceful
life
of society. To illustrate
this
, according to Interpol report of 2018 points out that 70% of terrorist attacks in
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,France and America
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by illegal migrated
people
.
On the other hand
, the more
people
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down in
a specific regions
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, it will definitely
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the natural resources and
other living organism
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. In conclusion, there is a saying 'a coin has two
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similarly
,
migration
creates constructive and destructive changes in our society.
Although
, it is the responsibility of government authority and the local
people
to protect their own country and
also
generate human resources for future development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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